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there's a place that's where you are
and there's a place that's where i am
and there's a place somewhere between
where i wish that we could be

just me and you
let the music take us through
and wash away the troubles
(it'll all come out in the wash)
let it wash away the pain
and let it bring us both together
there's only our love here to gain

i've heard all that they say 'bout you
you're shy and easily enraged
but when you took my gaze i saw the truth-
you didn't disengage

don't be estranged
don't be estranged
don't be a stranger, no-
don't push me away

just stay right here

just me and you
let the music take us through
and wash away the troubles
(it'll all come out in the wash)
let it wash away the pain
and let it bring us both together
there's only our love here to gain

if you love me please don't say so
if you care don't hold my hand
but if you want this all to be alright
just stay with me tonight

and watch me through
just me and you

just me and you
to watch each other through

just me and you
just me and you

just me and you
let the music take us through
and wash away the troubles
(it'll all come out in the wash)
let it wash away the pain
and let it bring us both together
there's only our love here to gain
©2005-2009 ~bouncingchipmunk
:iconbouncingchipmunk:

Author's Comments

another one of these... less specific than the others. but it is meant to be in some way shape or fom song lyrics, which is why it isn't as flowinf or whatever and has a lot of repetition. it actually started out as an email... go figure :shrug:

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:iconbeyondthemist:
I think this is probably the best of your series sort of thing. I'm not quite sure what to think of it, though. I do know, though, that it succeeded in making me emotional in some way, which is what its all about, isn't it? Tapping into the reader's emotions. In that respect, then, it was very well written. The flow doesn't matter as much because of the words themselves.

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"I guess it must be the flag of my disposition, out of hopeful green stuff woven." - Walt Whitman
:iconbouncingchipmunk:
i'm not really sure what to think of it either...
it's one of those things that just sort of happened, i don't know. that's how most of my recent stuff has appeared, mostly because everything people have been telling me ends up sounding like it belongs in a poem or song... so i invent them myself. i'm glad that you liked it, and thanks for the favorite, i appreciate it. and i guess it's a good thing that it "touched you" so to speak... ah well.

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Film!
Adventure, tedium, no family, boring locations, Dark rooms, perfect faces, egos, money, Hollywood and sleaze!

Music!
Food of love, emotion, mathematics, isolation, Rhythm, feeling, power, harmony, and heavy competition!
:iconlittlerain:
I like it a lot! It's really interesting to read all the poems in your the series. This one i think is my favorite of the other 3

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:tea: Tea ...:tea:
:iconpakkun:
This one definitly sounds just like a song in my head.

I think this one might be my favorite of the four as well.

--
Eating fruit is like abortion for plants.
:iconpappylilac:
WOW!! this is like a real song!! I really like it, Danica!!

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'When you're driving with the brakes on...'

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July 28, 2005
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